This was a struggle to read from the beginning. The writing, the characters, the story, and everything were just horrible. I was thrown off immediately by the little story of trying to make incest seem cute. Then it later just randomly throws out that they are adopted, trying to make this sound all okay even though they literally grew up in the same orphanage, have the same birthmark on their arms and look almost exactly like siblings. Even if this was taken out of the story or ignored, each chapter and every scene was a pain to read. It was worse than reading a teenagers ... unedited fanfiction.